[HANASHIR:15363] Re: Avinu Malkeinu

[Rabbi Richard Schachet <LVRabbi...>]

look who says she is nothing
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  From: Danielkare (at) aol(dot)com 
  To: hanashir (at) shamash(dot)org 
  Sent: Monday, September 22, 2003 4:59 PM
  Subject: [HANASHIR:15361] Avinu Malkeinu


  I thought I would share my translation for Avinu Malkeinu...maybe not exactly 
politically correct, as I'm using an old machzor, but I hope it might work for 
some....

  Our Father, (or "Sovereign") Our God, Our King (or "we sing"...)
  Oh please hear this prayer that we bring
  We call out to you
  For without you
  We know that we are nothing.
  Be gracious unto us
  With charity and love
  And give to us your lovingkindness
  Save and shelter us.

  -Karen Daniel