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Re: [Fwd: Fwd: Quick laugh]



> *  quintessential Jewish "haiku"*
>
>sunrise
>sunset
>I should live
>so long
>  

As the resident poet I would like to acknowledge the humor in this.  (ha
ha)  And also point out that a haiku is traditionally 17 syllables in 3
lines broken up into 5, 7, and 5 syllables each line and following this
traditional paradigm I would suggest classifying the above poem (4 lines, 9
syllables total) as a "Very Short Poem", and perhaps even as "The
Quintessential Jewish Very Short Poem."

On the other hand, I'm not all that traditional.

Shavuah Tov,

Rick

Lupert: It's The Website - & - The Poetry Super Highway
http://www.loop.com/~rickpoet



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