[HANASHIR:13148] Re: tu b'shvat song

[deborah dolin <kibitz30...>]

you are the best!!!!!!!!!!!!  
I'm not good at song writing or re-writing music!   This is very much 
appreciated!
b'shalom,
deborah dolin
 Ros Schwartz <ros_schwartz (at) yahoo(dot)ca> wrote:Instead of 

"Supper was delicious we had sausages and veal
And then I brought the fruit salad to finish off the meal"

... how about

"Supper was delicious, and we ate it with great zeal"

... or

"Supper was delicious, all the food had such appeal"

... or even

"Supper was delicious, we ate till our plates were clean
And then I brought the fruit salad, the best you've ever seen"

... just my $0.02 worth (Canadian of course)

- Ros

12/12/02 12:27:37 PM, deborah dolin wrote:
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> YIKES! 
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> The reddness is now off my cheeks! I didnt finish reading/singing
> through the whole song. That is something to be fixed! 
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> Any suggestions? 
>
> thanks for catching that Jeff! 
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>
> deborah 
>
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