[HANASHIR:7482] Re: need prophet music!!!

[Rick Lupert <Rick...>]

>Obadiah, Obadiah, Obadiah Ha navi
>We don't know that much about you
>only words from history.
>
>Only twenty-one short verses
>in the book that bears your name
>'tis the story of how Edom
>cheered the vanquished Jerusalem
>
>You predict a Jewish future
>Hashem's judgment yet to come
>that the tables will be turned and
>Is-ra-el will rule Edom.
>

Adrian,

The rhyming of "name" and "Jerusalem" in the second verse was so 
painful, I had to put bandaids on my eyeballs.

Well done.

Rick
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